Dance Of The Rain Comments

This is potentially a first-rate poem but it does need some careful revision. For example, Line 2: Its curtains is hope that be woven..

This is potentially a first-rate poem but it needs some careful adjustment. For example, Line 2: Its curtains is hope...? ? ?

i love the part about... the faries play rhythm about the beautiful songs of autumn. very inspiring i loved it

Refreshingly beautiful write...I could feel the lightness of the rain within your words. I especially like, Water arrows race towards the Earth... I was happy to be caught in the downpour of your lovely poem. I invite you to explore my poetry, as well. PEACE

You have a great mind and master the art of expression very well.

A profound poem about Nature and it's beautiful phenomenon, rain

Great imaginary inspired by mother nature!

Interesting, showy, and great! I gave it a 10. :)

That's wonderful when you say calm and authorative, and the imagery in your poem is awesome. Your get a ten out of ten.

Beautiful poem. You have captured rain very well..Enjoyed reading each lines..

cool and gentle wish of the rain kick out your lines to remember forever, , , , God bless a 10/10

nice writing rain is essential for nature to grow. nice rain dance

Interesting piece of work with some original turns of phrase. (Might be worth your looking at it again in a few months' time to see if there are two or three things you still want to retain.)

I love the imagery in this poem. Nice work

Yes, I can remember that event. Try Shower when you have a spare minute. Thanks.

Oh, that was just gorgeous! I gave it a 10

Wow! great. Very beautiful depiction of your thought and imaginations. So enchanted.

Wow Wow WoW! ! ! What wirite my friend! I really loved the way you have expressed. No twists, no turns and only beauty!

Wow! The Utopian world of yours drenched me in web of beautiful imaginations. Harvesting faith in the form of Rain. Loved these lines.

We all need rain and some get it more than others but man is destroying nature causing it to rain out of season and acid rain to kill off the trees and forests.