Monday, December 17, 2012

Dance Of The Pines Comments

Rating: 4.5

It was the eve of the reckoning.
The moon shone as a spotlight,
Searching every pine for answers.
They whispered secrets to the night,
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Argentine Tango
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Charles Monroe 20 July 2014

-Tongue Tango- In place of being Tongue tied and tangled We mutually fissioned And danced a tongue tango. Orchids and moonlight Baby blue hue Words are our music And papers are ballrooms A glance that will ask... May I have this dance? ... P.X

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Luscious Larry 31 December 2012

Nice concrete images. Beautiful.

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Saadat Tahir 28 December 2012

lovely....i perceived this as a poem celebrating the beauty of nature...hope i am right lovely tender and loving lines... quite a word pic too...

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