Saturday, March 3, 2018

Dance Of The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon sings silently in filaments of silver
Over fields of whispering ribbons of flax
Dancing the breeze of the stars to the river
A misty track luminous to the river and back
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Seamus O' Brian
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Nudershada Cabanes 04 March 2018

A brilliantly penned poem. Wonderfully rhymed verse with beautiful imagery. It flows smoothly.10

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Seamus O Brian 08 March 2018

Thank you, kind friend! Words of kindness are the currency of the bond of humanity. I am honored by your kindness, good poet.

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Rini Shibu 04 March 2018

Beautiful poem, liked Very much Seamus this journey of love with the moon.

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Seamus O Brian 08 March 2018

Hi, Rini! I am so glad you liked it. Actually, I thought of this one when I read your Queen of the Night poem, and realized I had never posted this. Thanks!

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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