Saturday, March 27, 2010

Dance Of Love(Ii) Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I look into your eyes, I see their light.
Our relationship seems to be indestructible.
I give myself to you, and I hold you so tight.
Being with you, our dreams are achievable.
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Marieta Maglas
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C. P. Sharma 06 April 2010

A perfect love dance in which the dancer disappears and only love remains. I specially loved, When you penetrate me I become another being You take everything from me and give me everything It is like a dawn of our souls, another awaking We love each other so much, we feel like exploding CP

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John Knight 29 March 2010

MARI - ARE YOU TRYING TO TELL US SOMETHING THROUGH YOUR REPETITION OF THIS PERFECT POEM? - YOU MUST BE COMPLETELY IN LOVE TO WRITE LIKE THIS. IT IS BEAUTIFUL - THANK YOU. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X (A poetic kiss for a perfect Poetess)

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Afzal Shauq 28 March 2010

It is a connection between the hearts, the soul and the body We dance our feelings, our tears, our thoughts and our passion. Dancing in rhythm with stars, our love we need to embody Dance is deeper, intricately intertwined, the impetus of our vision. sweet..very sweet..the techncalities of poems and the idea makes me think because your subjects are alwas new and innoveation is found..good vision..enjoyed it and read few time..each time it has giveb me sort of new pleasure..really a good poet you are and you romantic vision is heart touching one..well done

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Surya . 28 March 2010

a beautiful poem on science of love.the last para is really wonderfull 'We understand our bodies language, with polar reactions in this romance Being without you, I'm like a little star, losing its mass and its ray But when I'm with you, your love enhances me and get me in trance And we become two souls dancing the love dance in the same clay.' voted10 surya

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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