Dance Of Love Iii Comments

i like these lines in ur poem. is a connection between our hearts and souls and bodies We dance our laughter, our tears, we dance our madness Two to one heart, two to one soul, dancing in rhythm with stars Dance is deeper, more intricately intertwined, the impetus of our passion your ecstacy u express in wondeful terms. thank you for sharing. invite u to read my poems too. thank u

This is a really beautiful poem. The only thing I would recommend differently is the icons around the title, its takes away from the name of the poem, which adds to the whole poetic expierence. I enjoyed it alot though. Blessed Be, Em

MARI - THIS IS BEAUTIFUL YOU HAVE EXCELLED YOURSELF IN THIS VERY VERY EMOTIVE POEM. All the emotion in the poem is summed up in the last line. 'We are two souls dancing the love dance in the same body'. Whoever inspired this lovely LOVE POEM - Mari - is the most blessed Man in the Universe. Thank you for sharing your inner heart - I love it. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

A ‘c’ming’ into the ‘into’ poem… fine diction… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

nice very nice... when the night starts to dark and the room is filled with joy to every kissess of cruely hurt the lips of naked bodies satisfaction is unspoken kiss mark leaves anywhere ...anywhere..everywhere...marks were left ...actually ur work is nicely done...poetic sexy words...