Dance Of Love Comments
I ride on your thighs, and I embrace you with my both hands
The wind scraps our deep love dance off with the sudden gusts.
Our swift flicks it several times, its tip just touching the wet sand.
The sky is blue and the leaves of our tree are covered with orange rust.
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Wow! ... Did you by any chance, attend any emotional school? You make me feel like hmmmm.... hmmmmm.... Nice rhyme. Very tempting.
Like floor exercise [is also a Dance] in gymnastics where Romanians have monopoly [smile] here in format of ‘You keep real close, ’...this real is REAL … thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Sensual and passionate! Dance of love...highest form of worship! So enjoyed; D
WOW i think love is a dance and we all make mistakes in it but we get right up and we show our best moves GREAT POEM
A deep and dearing dance that is simply delightful!
oh what a lovely dance of love words! mind blowing allegorical expressions! compact and beautiful indeed! 10+++
You keep real close, lover whispers to my ear, I fly to the heavens’ high You run your fingers through my hair, then dance your lips in orbital circle Yet another rip in the space time continuum, and a return of perfect fry, Our love makes slain the sentinel, a deity who is surrounding our crepuscle..........................................................lovely positioning of letters and its spirit and making us known the depth of real love. i was swept away by its strong urge and felt as if part of it.. lovely....10 read mine... a dad end... a need to do
yet most stunning, portrayal by art of love, eyes seems to serenade by gloss of kiss as when crystallized like grains of green hidden within vein of leaf that sways jingling by the the misty breeze yet ruminating........., most emotively passionate, nature may stand and stare to the very art of beauty as dappled on wings of butterfly, wonderful write by sparkling imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing
This is a beautiful Love Poem - Mari - you have unlocked your heart for us all to enjoy thank you. V 1 There is a degree of submission here but also shared emotion due to the 'closeness' of the dance. V 2 When two lovers dance it is 'covert lovemaking' - tremor - thrill - closeness - embracing - kissing - release of inhibition - it stirs so so many memories. V 3 TWO become ONE an explosion and stirring of happiness and the subtle promise of consumation. Shining - high trance - love in the emerald eyes of you beloved - I love this stanza - so so evocative. V 4 Even closer still - heaven's high and the wonderful descripters of the God given tactility of fingers - lips - hair. 'Our love makes slain the senital - a deity who is surrounding our crepulscle' - AWESOME. In literature THE CREPULSCLE (Twilight) is 'A poetic panorama of liberated loive and love'.. This is a very choice and enigmatic word with which to end this Perfect Love Poem. Another Maglas Gem - thank you Mari. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.
Wow there are strange words that I didn't know. Anyway this piece reminds me of the movies Shall we dance (JLO) and Dirty Dancing. When I read each line it brings me back watching these movies. Wonderful!
Graphic metaphoric reality with exuberance of poetic romance flowing freely and frill-ly 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
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7/28/2025 10:39:41 PM # 1.0.0
Sensuousness is at its peak. The dance of love is the dance of soul. I like your unique style. Captivating write.