Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
Friday, December 5, 2014

Dance Of Garden Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once planned to eat cashew nut one warden,
He thought of taking rest in shadow in garden.
Various thoughts came in to his mind more,
He could not control and did run near river shore.
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Mantu Mahakul
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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2015

He knew that dance was done here by illusion, Many people fell down in adversely confusion. Conclusion he drew not to run behind matter, He did awake and walked in the true path better. A lovely thoughtful poem............................10

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Simone Inez Harriman 02 November 2015

He knew that dance was done here by illusion, Many people fell down in adversely confusion. Conclusion he drew not to run behind matter, He did awake and walked in the true path better. I love this last stanza. Life is an illusion. Material things do not matter. There is calm and serenity on the right path. Beautiful poem, Mantu...10

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Melvina Germain 01 November 2015

Delightful imagery painted within this poem, journeying through was beautiful and amazing. Thank you.....

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John Rickell 20 December 2014

I enjoyed reading this poem I like the way you have used the words

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John Rickell 08 December 2014

I enjoyed reading this poem. it has a character all its own.

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Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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