Friday, October 17, 2014

Dance Of An Acrobat Comments

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Poverty constrains,
To take the risks,
Hunger forces them to bring,
Their innocent daughters,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geetha Jayakumar 23 October 2014

Beautiful poem. Very well portrayed. I could imagine each lines...very true said, poverty and hunger can make one do anything. Great message you conveyed through this poem. Loved reading it.

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Sarmad Mirza 23 October 2014

what a beautiful message given in this poem really like it

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Valsa George 19 October 2014

Many parents force their daughters to earn money using their body! Even girls who are at the threshold of puberty unfortunately are made victims.... It is sad that parents do this mean thing to fight back the monsters of poverty and starvation! We have a moral responsibility to share our resources with the less fortunate, so that the starving parents will not be persuaded to sell even their daughters to appease the family's hunger! Very touching write!

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 October 2014

I am reminded of Sahir Ludhianvi- Do boonden sawan ki ek sagar ke seep men tapke aur moti ban jaye dooji gande jal men girkar aona aap ganae kisko mujrim samjhe koi aur kisko dosh lagae? Do kaliyan gulshan ki ek sehre ke beech gundhe aur man hi man itrae dooji arthi ki bhent chdhe aur mitti men mil jaye kisko mujrim samjhe koi aur kisko dosh lagae? do sakhian bacpan ki ek singhasan per baithe aur rropmati kahlae dooji apne roop ke kara galiyon men bik jae kisko mujrim samjhe koi aur kiski dosh lagaye? In the season of beautiful poems on dance it is a different poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 October 2014

Poverty is device or mechanism to destroy humanity and democracy

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 17 October 2014

Poverty to risk and hunger to force in street, who will earn our breads? Very nicely raised voice in An Acrobat Dance. Beautiful poem.

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