Let rain fall down
Wake me up
Wash my dreams away
I'm coming home
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Excellent work here Christina my lovely....you've created an imagery diamond of a piece....you can almost feel the rain on your skin......wonderful 10++
you just stirred me with a desire to dance in the rain :)) lovely and beautiful poem :)))
You make a reader hear the sound of the falling rain with this poem..and a longing to dance in it of course :) Thanks for sharing. Best wishes and keep on writing. A.
Let rain fall down Wake me up Wash my dreams away I'm coming home...dear so much worry. rain is delayed.. beautifully themed poem i like it....10 read mine rain delay, , o, mother, papa do u know and papa u too
i could hear the tuneful pitter patter of the rain in your dance-ful words thanks for sharing
I remember the song 'im dancin in the rain' by Fred Astaire.Its like an absolution havin to dance in the rain and get wet wet wet.Nice piece Hristina.
very good.....................