Monday, June 8, 2009

Dance In The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.9

Let rain fall down
Wake me up
Wash my dreams away
I'm coming home
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Christina Phan
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 August 2009

very good.....................

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 12 August 2009

there is joy and music in this poem...luved it

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~ Jon London ~ 21 July 2009

Excellent work here Christina my lovely....you've created an imagery diamond of a piece....you can almost feel the rain on your skin......wonderful 10++

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Dave Tanwar 18 July 2009

you just stirred me with a desire to dance in the rain :)) lovely and beautiful poem :)))

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Yelena M. 04 July 2009

You make a reader hear the sound of the falling rain with this poem..and a longing to dance in it of course :) Thanks for sharing. Best wishes and keep on writing. A.

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Let rain fall down Wake me up Wash my dreams away I'm coming home...dear so much worry. rain is delayed.. beautifully themed poem i like it....10 read mine rain delay, , o, mother, papa do u know and papa u too

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Chitra - 20 June 2009

i could hear the tuneful pitter patter of the rain in your dance-ful words thanks for sharing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009

I remember the song 'im dancin in the rain' by Fred Astaire.Its like an absolution havin to dance in the rain and get wet wet wet.Nice piece Hristina.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 June 2009

Love this joyful dancing poem.

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Joseph Poewhit 08 June 2009

That is one great idea.

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Christina Phan

Christina Phan

San Jose, Califorina
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