Dance In The Light Comments

very good and nice for recitation as a poem.

Soft, sweet words, making their gentle entry in to inner realms. Beutifully expressed the ever present pairs of opposites, where life and death have their eternal dance. Greetings for succeding in creating beauty, though with a bitter reminding that time we got, isn't infinite. Regards

I'm jealous.ur a better writer than i: ( but dont worry, i uv IT and i luv You AL THE SAME: PCHEERS HUNNIE 10+++++

niiiiiiiiice emmmy: D veryyyy beautiful, especially the title; i really like it: D cheers darling 10 Jess

'Soon death and destruction will ever bloom like ivy grows accros the ground, entising and toxic' As if these lines are dancing in front of me! Love,10++