Friday, January 20, 2006

'Dance In Misery' Comments

Rating: 4.5

I walked into the room
He was standing there looking as he always did
His hair was black as charcoal
His eyes shined like blue diamonds
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Brytanne Lee
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Lylyanna Pilewski 29 May 2006

nice Lylyanna

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Charles Chaim Wax 20 January 2006

a wonderful poem about the great urge to love and be loved yet the world spins out of control and torments slices the heart still beating with desire fine work

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Brytanne Lee

Brytanne Lee

Erie, PA
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