Thursday, August 6, 2009

Dance Hall Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dressed for the ball, carry your shoes
Ready to dance to rhythm and blues
Or maybe the swing with continental flair
Following steps of would be Fred Astairs
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lola cesini
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Afzal Shauq 15 October 2009

realistic piece of poetry.. profesionally done and the flow is very much poetic and heartfelt...

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Michael Harmon 06 August 2009

You have a talent, Lola, for anapestic rhythm. This is a very entertaining work; a fine effort. :)

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