Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Dance For Pharaohs Comments

Rating: 5.0

Egyptian spirits wake to view
A Wistful beauty make her debut
Barefoot as she moves in time
In shadows of the tomb sublime
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T.James Becker
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Chuck Petz 27 October 2008

Thought I would sample your work. I am very fortunate having done so, This poem is a beutiful articulation of the sensual, in an historical context. Chuck

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David Desantis 03 October 2008

excellent man...you have a great style...i felt the imagery too, especially the way she moved and the dress...10/10

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Tom Balch 02 October 2008

The words just dance along the page, love this one, regards Tom 10

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T.James Becker

T.James Becker

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