Monday, June 2, 2025

Dance Class Comments

Rating: 5.0

My hair I put up behind my head with my hands,
I look over the gym floor to the director, the instruments in the stands.
I will do my best to float to the tune of the band.
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Emma Mcullough
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Rebecca Navarre 06 June 2025

Ever so captivating to your readers! .. As you wish the dance wouldn't end! ... Breathtakingly beautiful! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 06 June 2025

Incredible description of dancing and the glorious feelings as the heart dances across the floor! ..

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Isadora Quagmire 03 June 2025

Great poem! Excellent rhymes and descriptions! When I was reading your poem I felt like I was there dancing with you! You really did a great job! Thanks for sharing this poem I really enjoyed it a lot! I love dancing too, you excellently describe the fun of dancing in this poem : )

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Timber Koleden 03 June 2025

A very good poem and great rhyming! Thank you so much for sharing this!

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