Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Dance Cheat Comments

Rating: 2.6

You are my dance-time lover
the one who dances dances dances;
while I sit at the table
with my husband.
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Lonnie Hicks
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C. P. Sharma 30 October 2008

Superbly penned sincere feelings of the soul with perfectly matching rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for sharing the wonderful poem. CP

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Joseph Poewhit 28 October 2008

Some like that in the world

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Lonnie Hicks

Lonnie Hicks

Chicago Ill
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