Thursday, July 19, 2012

Dance At The Water's Edge Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dance at the Water's edge,
Ev'ry day and ev'ry hour,
Even when the Sun is high
You bring an angry show'r.
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Phillip Hoffeld
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Steve Prince 11 March 2016

Amazingly written. The symbolism is fantastic. I don't believe I have read this one.

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Saumya Gilra 02 June 2013

a very pretty and imaginative poem

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Valerie Dohren 19 July 2012

Lovely poem, very inspired, well written and rhymed.

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