Thursday, June 4, 2020
Dance Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Vanilla Coke & Pick 'n' Mix
Show me one of those magic tricks
Then I'll take you right by the hips
And dance, & dance, & dance 'til the mourning comes!
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Ratnakar Mandlik
04 June 2020
A bubbling energetic and inspiring song on a mood in life. A pleasurable read that inducts positive attitude too towards life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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7/29/2025 4:13:47 AM # 1.0.0
Well Bryony it's certainly a one of a kind write and there's nothing wrong with that. A little bit of originality and va va voom makes the poetry world go round. And the words Sugar Rush come to mind.10++. Many thanks and take care.