Dance Comments

I like the way your mind runs as it walks in tango with your heart and soul in this beautiful composition, regards, mandara

danceing helps you feel free and imagen the impossible no matter who are dancing

I really like this, very clear and enjoyable

Anusha, you did the dance well with its full rhythm and pleasants... while it concludes with the fantastic rhyme FRANCE, it gets its full spirit. thanks for sharing/salu

a nice clean lyrical poem. nice job piecing it together and ending with a bit of a twist. great job. keep on writing dear. Jen

you have danced to the beat in your mind, and this poem did unwind. very good write a ten

this was a great poem, real detailed. i loved it!

Dance is alright...France is surprising....nice....10

A dance would be amongst my favourite themes. Good one

rhythm alright...was good there...but the last line really left me pleasingly surprised...intelligent poem writing...thanks Anusha...10

fine verses...ryhtmic...well done

nice and clean. keep the grammer simple for all to understand. your grammer is just fine sweetie. keep writing ok

Poem sends a message of modern culture. As for grammer, I'm not the one to ask about that. To me word flow, feelings and meaning are the thing of poetry. But, keep writing

very nice poem, most of the others are also well done and give me the same feel.

hey anusha...seems you like experimenting with rhyme...nd its a great attempt too...as far as da grammar goes...wel i juz hv 1 thing to say, dat ur poem runs in both past and present tense at da same time! ! while poetry is only about experimenting with language, sometimes different tenses can create quite a rigamarolle in the readers mind...on a lighter note, i think u have a very vivid thought process which is rely good to see!

a lovely country indeed...included in your poem...

Well written - rewarded with applause from the stands. keep going

The flow of words with their rhymes Make a good read indeed. When coming to the theme You could be still more strong Reading it through your age. Keep writing. Try to cover a theme of interest into the write. You have a good sense of writing. Thank you dear poet, for sharing this poem.

Lovely composition,10+++

very nicely written...a gathering or a show there