Monday, May 18, 2009

Dance Comments

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The spotlight brightens
The music begins
I'm up on my toes
as I twirl and spin
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Erica German
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Luke Britsch 21 May 2009

wow, this is really pretty. the short lines and lack of punctuation create a sense of rhythm and flow. similar to actual dancing, whether this was intentional or not, who knows, but your love for dance is expressed very well.

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