Saturday, May 16, 2009

*dance* Comments

Rating: 3.1

under the shadow, over the brow
is a place where (i heard) ,
it always is now;
past the street lights, beyond the black night,
...
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David Taylor
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MARCI MADE 21 August 2009

Ah, the dance of 'love' carrying each other in our souls here and beyond eternity..perfect bliss, perfect write. thank you for sharing.... :)) .

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stop revolving 09 June 2009

nice, romantic. I love to dance like on the wedding...

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Alison Cassidy 30 May 2009

There is a touch of e e cummings in this dear little piece that touches the place between. Between the here and the now, the up and the down the yesterday and the tomorrow. Love the universal theme and the dance with it's improvised choreography and light heart. Namaste, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Viola Grey 16 May 2009

ahhh, a wonderful dance with words here...such a pleasure to read.

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Fiona Davidson 16 May 2009

Beautiful poetry David...enjoyed reading this....thank you...Fi 10+++

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David Taylor

David Taylor

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