Thursday, June 30, 2011

Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

To dance with such emotion
It is beautiful to me
I wish I had such talent
That everyone could see
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Haley Akin
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Raeanne Furfaro 17 August 2011

This is a beautiful poem, Dance is nothing but feeling and it feels so good. It is emotional, releasing and cathartic. I learned how to favorite a poem, this is one of them. Beautiful prose for a beautiful act of grace. Brava

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Juan Olivarez 30 June 2011

So, so beautiful Haley, great rhyming scheme and meter, absolutely fabulous.

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