Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Dance Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dance dance into the night, hold me tight hold me close.
Never let loose never let go.
Scream and shout 'I love you, ' until our voices give way.
Cry with me but not tears of sorrow yet tears of joy.
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Khairul Ahsan 09 January 2014

For a while, I too got into the rhythm of your dance. Thanks. 'Sit with me under the tree, until we ourselves grow roots. Because nothing else matters as long as I have you and you have me.' - Very well said!

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Noreen Carden 26 November 2013

Hi Gary what a lovely poem i like the line about you both growing roots

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