Tuesday, September 16, 2014

Damsel Of Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spouted with the stream of morning light
dancing in breeze of honey flight
singing the melody of sweetest night
she heaved ardently in the azure sky
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ramesh rai
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 September 2014

As she crossed threshold of life the life is filled with enormous light Beautiful lines in a poem full of beauty. Thank you.

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 September 2014

A lovely poem, touches the hearts.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 September 2014

as she had to dwell throughout days stuck the round reddish bindi on her forehead her aroma spreaded over distant land A beautiful personification of nature, in Ramesh Rai's lovely style and charming description with pearls of appealing words.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 September 2014

Very intresting poem that defined love, love eternity and concluding here wow As she crossed threshold of life the life is filled with enormous light she sparsed her energy for every life so as to make them a gayful life

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Gajanan Mishra 16 September 2014

see the beauty, life is beautiful.

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