Friday, February 5, 2016

Damsel In The Cloud Comments

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Oh, the damsel in the cloud!
A poet built a home in the layer
Of the fleeting patches up there,
Just to catch your glimpse and be proud.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Valsa George 24 September 2020

Very imaginative and lovely! Only poets can have such fantasy! Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem!

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Hazel Durham 18 July 2017

Original and imaginative write, love the title, love the poem, thank you for sharing!

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Khairul Ahsan 23 May 2020

Thanks for mentioning the title. I take special care and give time in choosing the title of my poems and when it is appreciated, I feel so glad! Much inspired by your appreciative comment, @Hazel Durham.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2016

@Edward Kofi Louis, Thanks for reading my poem and quoting from it. Thanks for the appreciation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2016

The poet's gloomy face wore a smile! Nice piece of work.

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