Damp My Desire? Comments

Great work with the muse of the Lifestyle of mankind. Thanks for sharing.

My third visit here, Linda, and I'm laughing (and marveling) just as much as I did the first time round ('...well that ruined digestion...' - ya ha ha!) . Love, Gina.

Linda, tremendous energy! I enjoyed the driving pace and structure. I hope your partner isn't taking you for a sucker! Thanks & have a great 2007 Martin

Both clever and funny - (I suppose that means very well written!) Thanks

Coming back to this one today, Lind, and it's given me a much needed energy boost. And like Raynette, the final few lines really got me giggling. Love, Gina.

From the ridiculous to the sublime, Linda. This is a fascinating poem....and made me laugh at the end. That is, after all, the only thing one can do when faced with such a question. Good poem, my friend. Raynette

I love it when a poem stuns me speechless. GRAND writing. Susie.

I don't understand everything you say here, Lind, but that hasn't stopped me enjoying it. A power write. Warm regards, Gina.

Wonderful poem. I wonder who the vampire was? Anyone I know? love Gershon