Damned Society! Comments

really heartfelt.. everyone talks but it is only a few who walk the talk..

The concluding six lines convey all that is needed! I really appreciate the lines, 'to bring the change, be the change! ' Great write!

Excellent poem, powerful and quite dramatic. Beautiful inspired write.

Excellent rendering of thoughts so immaculate and powerful! Your write here laughs at the conventional chains binding the human stocks and badly cries for the re emergence of a substitute forum of humans with real traits and conviction. Thank you Mr Vivek for your random invitation and I feel like having discovered in this mess of poems and their ghostly renditions over this forum.

What a poem with great rhythm and flow, the theme is very much strong, we all are chained by the society but it's also worth thinking that what's society? Who make it? Absolutly that are we people who costitute it so to change the society we must change ourselves, To bring the change Be the change Well done Vivek Thanks for sharing

This is a very strong and upstand poem...I like the stanzas and how they flow into one another you are a great poet in the making...I love your work thanks for letting me read your poetry have a grand new year my friend

A strong voice. What's the need of society which can't give us dignity?

It reminds me tne aggressive words of Swami Vivekananda, Better to live like a roaring lion than to be a creeping worm.Good.