Saturday, September 5, 2015

Damn Noise (Cinquain) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wind chimes
Dance in the breeze
But after a short while
The bloody things get on my nerves
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David Wood
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2015

Wonderful depiction. A beautiful poem that touches the heart. Thanks for sharing. ......10

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Kelly Kurt 05 September 2015

Most people, I'm sure, can relate. Even Chopin gets old after long enough.: -)

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Kim Barney 05 September 2015

Well written! I've never owned wind chimes, have thought maybe I would like some, but now... I'm not so sure!

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