Sunday, February 24, 2008

Damn Friendship! * Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyday is very similar to the day before
Feelings are bleeding from the core of my heart
a deep place where I cannot look for anymore,
look for a remedy that were not tart.
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L.P. Alexanders
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Janell Cressman 18 June 2009

i'm guessing this is about a girl you use to like? ? ? I think it is perfect, the flow the words everything is perfect, it's written with great feeling, and to me that makes a poem perfect

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Sameer Ahmed 10 June 2009

A good gesture shown to a true friend in this rather nostalgic poem with elaboraiton of olden memories of those gold friendship days..

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