It’s late, too late to be raining
The dog does not walk the old man.
The teenage buzz drowned in yesterday’s paper.
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we're getting rain when it should be snow -~- awesome, Blaine. structure - was there. staccato images, in my mind, depict a grand imagination. care, Goldy.
A very well written poem with great imagery/metaphors. Hugs Anna xxx