Friday, February 2, 2007

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It’s late, too late to be raining
The dog does not walk the old man.

The teenage buzz drowned in yesterday’s paper.
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Anna Russell 09 February 2007

A very well written poem with great imagery/metaphors. Hugs Anna xxx

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Goldy Locks 02 February 2007

we're getting rain when it should be snow -~- awesome, Blaine. structure - was there. staccato images, in my mind, depict a grand imagination. care, Goldy.

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