Friday, November 20, 2015

Damn! …. Dementia! ….. [inspired By A Message From Ph Friend Valsa G.; I Forgot To Capitalize In The Body Of The Poem] Comments

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now that we're getting well on in years,
there's a pox which to some brings tears.
it's several conditions, all called dementia.
and i say this to it: 'who the hell sent ya?
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Bri Edwards
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Kelly Kurt 20 November 2015

Don't think I'm full blown yet.: -)

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Rajnish Manga 20 November 2015

Lovely transport of an equally worthy idea into the poem makes it a treatise on dementia. Enjoyed it. 'dementia can make an idiot out of me or you.'

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