Wednesday, June 19, 2019

Damaged Beyond Repair Comments

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There was once a man
Happy and whole
Although frail of body
He had an iron will
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Whimsical Wanderer
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Susan Williams 20 June 2019

Interesting style here. Like a ballad sung in the dark ages.. Would like to see more from you.

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Thank you for the feedback. I'd appreciate any criticisms that you may have as well.

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Panagiota Romios 19 June 2019

Welcome good poem keep writing as you speak from the heart

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Thanks, buddy, both for your feedback and advice.

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Panagiota Romios 19 June 2019

Great poem welcome I am new here, too. I wish you love. And a terrific day Panagiota

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Panagiota Romios 19 June 2019

Great poem from your heart. Welcome to life. We all get hurt and we all find the right love one day. I wish you love. Panagiota {Welcome to the family here.}

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Panagiota Romios 19 June 2019

welcome, WW....I hope you will learn that we all survive heartaches.. You are far stronger than you think. Unless one is dead or paralyzed, you will find that love. All of us are the walking wounded! Your piem comes from your heart, I like that. Secret; there is a universe filled with a possible mate.)) Panagiota. I can't count the numbers of times I have been hurt

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 June 2019

such a nice start, Whimsical Wanderer. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Thank you, I'll definitely check out your poem.

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