Damaged Comments

Great write. I (unfortunately) can so relate to this. Thank you for sharing, We're not alone.

Never let pain suffocate you, great poem.

A great simile poem, pain can cause damage emotionally, well versed thought.

Amazing emotion, I've yet to have my heart broken but I think I know what it feels like now...

these sharp shards left laying into my heart they do sink so with every agonizing beat painful and deeply felt nice poetry

Wow, a shattering piece...broken mirror/broken heart. It still cuts like a knife...

You just keep getting better... Such a descriptive powerful poem... Your words came to life and I felt them... Excellent poem...