Saturday, January 13, 2007

Damage Done Comments

Rating: 4.0

The damage done
The bridges burned
The options gone
The lessons learned
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Carsten Thomsen
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Owain Glyn 29 December 2012

This is the second piece of your work that I have read, I shall definitely read some more.

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Alla Simone 26 October 2012

The erasing of past That's my favorite line, but the last stanza is intensely beautiful too. Thanks for sharing.

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Roong S 24 July 2012

The last paragraph is awesome! !

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Wahab Abdul 07 February 2012

this is a very nice poem sir, the damage has been done and i learnt my lesson. thanks.

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Dickson Mseti 25 January 2012

You have proved the maturity of creativity that make you rise to the brotherhood level, yap the damage will stay as the heart pretending to forget it is already done.

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