Thursday, November 15, 2012

Damage Control Comments

Rating: 4.0

The first day sings sublimely in his mind,
standing on the honed blade of her smile.
She permeates each niche of his desire,
brazen joys which better sense denies.
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Maggie Munro
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Adeline Foster 15 May 2013

Deep, Deep but you carried it off. Read mine - We the Unencumbered - Adeline

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Terry O'leary 10 February 2013

Hi Maggie... just came to see if you had anything new... well, I just had to be content with re-reading your 'older' work... which was a very pleasant 'task'... Terry

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Terry O'leary 14 January 2013

Another very good poem, Maggie... Hope to see more soon... Terry

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Donald Kuutsi 29 November 2012

great poem maggie keep the fire burning.....

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Owain Glyn 21 November 2012

This is REAL poetry, stunning, stunning, stunning!

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Lyn Paul 15 November 2012

Great writing Maggie, will have to tune in for the next episode.

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