Friday, September 14, 2007

Daisy's Try Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your fate is in your hands,
And that of our young love.

Let not your attempts
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Elmer Romulo Valdez
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Alison Cassidy 15 September 2007

This one reminds me of an old childhood game of picking the petals off the daisy 'she loves me, she loves me not; she loves me, she loves me not'. Perhaps it's the title. Yes, the metaphor of nature serves the poet well and this piece demonstrates that fact. I also like the authority you demand of your 'flower'. love, Allie xxxx

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