Daisy's Song Comments

A brilliant piece of poetry, sun, spring and night all have their part! ! ! A glorious poem! !

Nice poem

I look where no one dares, And I stare where no one stares, And when the night is nigh, Lambs bleat my lullaby A happy carefree life well described.

In a cloud.... thanks for posting.....

The great classical master that Keats is.... this poem shows us a glimpse of it.

This is hilarious. A small daisy, blooming luxuriously in a spring meadow. The yellow center of the delicate flower, a combination of the pupil and iris surrounded by the white petals of the sclera. All innocence as it peers upward, day and night, just waiting for a pretty girl to walk over it. The original up-skirt pervert. Perfectly charming. I hope it knows it's going to be on that lamb's menu the next day.

a poem that dares to look and say it's ok? ............well penned

.........most fabulous, love this ★

Sun is having great eyes. Very interesting and amazing sharing done definitely. Fantastic sharing done.10