Monday, February 8, 2016

Daisy In Her Hair Comments

Rating: 5.0

She sat silently
In the crowded city bus
Hands neatly folded
On her sunny yellow dress
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Annabel Cruz
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Simone Inez Harriman 08 February 2016

I really like the descriptive tones of your verse. You have penned the sensitive fragility of loneliness beautifully...10

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Annabel Cruz

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