Friday, September 12, 2008

Daissociating Our Love Comments

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Do you still remember
when we in the morning go up
in the same train
you fallen down
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Prasetya Utama
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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

It is not known whether u met her again? ! But this is a great experience in train or bus; getting acquainted with a new person of opposite sex; get enamoured and the end of journey ends the friendship. Many peoples' experience. A right subject for poetry; so well written.............my heartfelt 10

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Anjali Sinha 25 September 2008

nice poetry gesture of hand then disappearance of love regards anjali

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