Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Daisies Bloom In Autumn's Wood Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my image I perceive
The young child of mystery
As the wind combs gentle my long hair
To innocence flows a care-free air
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Trade Martin 12 May 2019

Lovely composition Lorraine...., keep up your fine work.....! ! !

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Beautiful descriptions throughout this delightful poem. The flowers, hair and the innocence all weave their magic. The Sandman's kiss did it for me! 10 Karin Anderson

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Bonnie Collins 07 April 2009

Lorraine, this is absolutly beautifull, I toatlly enjoyed it very much, it is filled with so much love and inner feelings as the silver valley approaches you... I know I have been to this valley and it makes you appricate your youth so much more.... Very nicely done.. Bonnie

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Buddhi Hatharaliyadda 23 December 2008

This is really a lovely poem with a hidden insight. your words are very contemplative and the flow is great. my 10 rating for this great work

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Missy Melita 06 November 2008

what a great words you use! it describes how a mother feel seeing her children. i wonder if my mom has the same way seeing me growing..

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Reshma Ramesh 28 October 2008

beautiful pleasant poem.............lovely

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 13 October 2008

Lorraine, I adore this poem but remember with the wrinkles will come wisdom...smile. Dorothy

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Ron Schmidt 08 October 2008

Beautiful! ! , Thank you for your wonderful comment on my poems, I know that time will define and to gain wisdom and knowledge from someone like you is going to be a blessing. Thanks again.

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