If I chose this rocky path
then why do I fight
to walk through fields
of plush daisies.
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Much thought and sensitivity within these lines young lady. The metophores of a rocky path, a field of daisies, and you opening the gate, makes me feel someone's heart was broken along the way. Hopefully they have found a different path full of sunflowers and sunshine! Well done.
for that glorious field of plush daisies..... nay the relections of your mind ..... the narcissist in your head
Hi Viola. Keep chasing the daisies but remember the dont grow well in the shade. well done thanks for the read. Regards Dave T
Dont let the shadows chill your glow, be true to you,10 Regards Tom
this is amazingly put together my friend... great great job here V. that person you're seeking is a reflection of your mind. I love those lines. Becca