Friday, March 7, 2008

Daisies Comments

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I went to the florist,
And asked for long lasting flowers.
He pulled out a bunch
And proudly said just arrived from
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Mamta Agarwal
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Mary Gordley 12 March 2008

What a captivating lovely poem. You paint the picture so well with your words that I can almost see these lovely flowers. Reading your poem was like receiving a bouquet. Thank you.

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Janri Gogeshvili 07 March 2008

'Dainty petals colour of new born baby’s cheeks'...Beautifully...

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