Saturday, May 28, 2005

Daisies Comments

Rating: 2.2

a hot summer night,
jazz rides the sticky air
and climbs in through my window.
the music of my memories,
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Elsa Bear
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Elsa Brooks 05 June 2005

oh that fight was magnificent!

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Amy Murtagh 29 May 2005

Your poem is, as you said, unfinished. But that's actually really effective. I liked this alot, probably because it made me think of THAT fight....haha. Well done Elsa, mwah, Amy xxox

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