Saturday, May 28, 2005
Daisies Comments
Rating: ★2.2
a hot summer night,
jazz rides the sticky air
and climbs in through my window.
the music of my memories,
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Amy Murtagh
29 May 2005
Your poem is, as you said, unfinished. But that's actually really effective. I liked this alot, probably because it made me think of THAT fight....haha. Well done Elsa, mwah, Amy xxox
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7/29/2025 10:46:04 AM # 1.0.0
oh that fight was magnificent!