Daisies Comments

A treasure! ! ! The daisies are so well described- winking at me brightly, - -their golden eyes- -nodding over. You show us how descriptions should be written- -by action, by inference, by words so perfectly chosen nothing else will do. Has this ever been Poem of the Day? ? ? ? If not, it should have. A 10 of course. I would like to read this poem at least once a week- for its innate beauty and as a reminder of how poems should be written.

Gino, ya don't need/want? the That at start of last line. see what i mean? are you SURE someone shouldn't kill bri? ? :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bri's FORM FOR COMMENTING ON POEMS: [n/a = not applicable to this poem] Poem Comment Form As my shoulder I did abuse, here is what may amuse: A poem-comment “form”; I know it ain’t the norm. But if I write comments TOO long, I’ll never hear the end of the song: “Bri, I Told You, Take Care Of Shoulder; You’re Young No More & Getting Older”. So this simple form I have devised. Don’t look at me! Are you so surprised? If I use the form I MAY have more time … to read more poems with, or without, rhyme. After all, I can’t read and NOT comment, and if you must have MORE input ……….from me … send me a request ……….., though “more” AIN’T free. A. I enjoyed it: Yes _x__ ; No___ ; I’m not telling___ B. I understood it: Yes_x__; No___; I’m not sure___ C. I enjoyed the: Rhyming ___; Rhythm___; Originality___; Cleverness__x_; Humor/Humour___; Seriousness__x_; Sensuality___; Humanity___; Alliterations___; Personal touch_x_; Other ____poet's note______ D. It makes me want to read more of your poems: Yes_x__; No___; I’m not telling___ E. The use of English was: Impeccable/good_(see above) __; Deplorable/bad___; In between___; No comment___ F. Could use proofreading: Yes___; No___; You decide_x__ THANKS FOR SHARING. bri :)

... Remind me that one day Despite the drizzle and the rain That summer will arise again. Very hopeful! Well done, Eugene!