Monday, September 7, 2020

Daises Grow From Hell Comments

Rating: 5.0

They loiter the surface in reverse osmosis
but their vertical corpses are hanging in ditches
moving downwards when their rent day is due
With their Hellespont visa bought on diplomatic truce
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Kevin Patrick
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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

Part 3. This is a piece of art and I am putting it on my fav list even though it is not a poem to read when one is depressed... but it is a poem that yields more and more each time it is read. 10++++

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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

Part 2. Kevin! ! ! You are writing from a lonely place of deep pain and I know this needs deep attention from our hearts to yours but what words can soothe the wound of knowing we all shall die and our bodies food for the worms? The only words I can think of are we love you and we care deeply.

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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

And in the end of the day if it rains on your parade It will all cease to matter when your headfirst in the grave // For daisies grow from... and they'll soon grow onto me and you - - - >

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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

And in the end of the day if it rains on your parade It will all cease to matter when your headfirst in the grave // For daisies grow from... and they'll soon grow onto me and you - - - > Kevin! ! ! You are writing from a lonely place of deep pain and I know this needs deep attention from our hearts to yours but what words can soothe the wound of knowing we all shall die and our bodies food for the worms? The only words I can think of are we love you and we care deeply.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 09 September 2020

Well man that's pretty much all true, not sure if exist. But if does they will definitely be there, and you won't be able to get rid of them like everywhere else. Wish I could write in such detail as you. Drugs or not, it's definitely vivid, and at times a dark theme. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.

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Kostas Lagos 09 September 2020

Yes, it was time.It's perfect!

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