On my brother's birthday,
I packed chocolates, served in tray
Golden, red and green,
brought in the little maid's eyes,
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cool poem......yeah that's how people are.....at the end, , , they come back to wat they really want.... i liked the way u connected this idea with the ad..... u r a true poet.........kp on going...
Last few lines were too good.