Sunday, August 19, 2012

Dairy, Milk & Silk Comments

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On my brother's birthday,
I packed chocolates, served in tray
Golden, red and green,
brought in the little maid's eyes,
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Shivani Agarwal
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Sawan Dhyani 25 August 2012

Last few lines were too good.

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Richa Gupta 21 August 2012

I loved it. Keep it up!

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Shihabudheen K J 20 August 2012

Intelligent idea.keep it up.

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Neetha Sasidharan 19 August 2012

cool poem......yeah that's how people are.....at the end, , , they come back to wat they really want.... i liked the way u connected this idea with the ad..... u r a true poet.........kp on going...

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