Dairies Of Us Is That Soul Of Mars Comments

C. A, do you mean diary and diaries? dairy and dairies refer to cow farms (at least in the united states!) . our milk, which we purchase in grocery stores, comes from a dairy/dairies. again, i enjoyed the poem enough to finish it but had trouble understanding it due, in large part, to the way you write/speak english. i'm glad i don't have to be proficient in a second language. thanks for sharing! bri

nice piece of written.you have sacrificed thr rhyme for the meaning.nice job pal.

Very meaningful n splendid was a joy to read :) keep it up ~Bella

Very beautiful hommage to special people... splendid poem... Terry