those tiny shiny stars up there
three of them in a triangle sit there
every night i see them from here
wonder what would be their chat up there
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Great imagination…and noetic chat… and poets are licensed for that…imagination is in every cells of poet … impossible or absurd it is… TEN Ms. Nivedita UK
Oh how l wish to hear there chat...they are called summer triangle if am not mistaken. You gave me this child like feeling of wanting to stand out like we use to as children and stare at the sky. Just maybe I will also hear what they chat about...beautifully penned...10++++
great flow of words...and every time i look up at the stars...i will remember this poem...regards
I can sense your true emotion in this poem, Sam! very imaginative yet, somehow reflects anyone's longing for 'Dainty Darlings, ' which i also believe based on your inner passion. Very well-written, my friend. :)
A poem full of wonderful imagery, are the dainty darlings your daughters maybe who are not with you? 10 Lynda xx
Dear Samanyan, Nice little imaginative poem with lyrical rhyming. Liked it Rated high Rajkumar
I can visualize SL lying in the terrace and singing the above verses on those three stars....well done...thank you
Dainty Darlings everyone's pet They take our fancy Make us wonder and long How will it be I muse With you, if they but talk! You make me walk With you the milky path! Beautiful!
samanyan It sounds like you have three daughter that are not speaking to you very much. And would like to know more about what is happening in their lives. The three daughters have become distant stars that you still hold deeply. I think the poem is a bit saccharin sounding. Too sweet. But that might be my personal opinion. I have three lost stars as well. I find it is I that needs to pick up the phone to get communication. I like the metaphor of the poem very much. a poet friend RH Peat
Its always true with we humans The far the reach, farthest the leaps We get amused and wonder its clasps Tiny little star up in the sky... never reveals The magnitude and heat with which it prevails Up in the sky, all stars are the darling dainties. Your wish to hear them will yield a great catch Go for it dear poet, one day you will know what they chat. Its difficult for the stars to hide their super power. Rightly you consolidate that at the end.
Lovely fancy. May be they are shy, because they are out in the open and everyone is ogling! Has the grace of a charming nursery rhyme.
if it is girls up there chatting away, you do not want to hear what they have to say.
I really love to read and hear topics about stars and moon..Maybe because it is a symbol of hope for me..to touch, to catch, to dream.. I love how you present this piece..for me, this flows gently and lovingly in my heart and mind. These line of yours below says it all... the melody of their sweet chat up there i really miss hearing from here
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