oh Divine!
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I too love writing poems.you have so many, which ones would like for me to read? I want to add so many of mine to this site, but I am to slow at typing. Thank you for your comment on my poem (OLD GLORY) I have revised it.
WHAT A PRETTY SWEET AND GREAT POEM IS THIS ONE...MELODIOUS, PERFECTLY DONE. RICH IDEA AND POETIC FLOW...ALL THESE ARE THE BEAUTIES OF YOUR THIS POEM..I REALLY LIKED IT VERY MUCH SPECIALLY THIS STANZA, , , , Oh Divine! Cant you give us two brains So we dont have these fancies vain
Beautiful idea of two brains! A creative perceptive thought. 10+++
Gud morning! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Morning prayers will always be answeered......... surprised na......... seeing me dis tym.......... ye............hehehe..........hehehe...........
Oh Divine! Please grant Anjali's prayers! ! Cheers. Subroto
ha ha ha...super imeginative.. you going to beat the devine..with its own music... lovely thoughts
Funny..I'm reminded of a tamil film song which asks for two hearts or minds...one to laugh and one to cry...nice write10
Sure ur prayer will be answered by the almighty......... keep it up......... 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
a prayer that sounds so innocent and childlike. The smooth flowing and unpretentious verse make for enjoyable reading.
Food for thought. Your imagination is limitless! ! Pleasure to read. Thanks.
Oh Divine what a talented bard you have given to this world, .........
i like my summers and winters how they are. But these poem might fit better were you live
i also wish for warmer summers seeing as i live in the northern u.s. and we've had some pretty frosty -30 degree wind chills
Simple in its profundity and profound in its simplicity. Well done my freind! 10+++