Wednesday, December 17, 2008

*** Daily Prayer *** Comments

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oh Divine!
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ANJALI SINHA
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Simple in its profundity and profound in its simplicity. Well done my freind! 10+++

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Daniel Harding 21 January 2010

I too love writing poems.you have so many, which ones would like for me to read? I want to add so many of mine to this site, but I am to slow at typing. Thank you for your comment on my poem (OLD GLORY) I have revised it.

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Afzal Shauq 31 May 2009

WHAT A PRETTY SWEET AND GREAT POEM IS THIS ONE...MELODIOUS, PERFECTLY DONE. RICH IDEA AND POETIC FLOW...ALL THESE ARE THE BEAUTIES OF YOUR THIS POEM..I REALLY LIKED IT VERY MUCH SPECIALLY THIS STANZA, , , , Oh Divine! Cant you give us two brains So we dont have these fancies vain

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

Beautiful idea of two brains! A creative perceptive thought. 10+++

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Mahfooz Ali 25 May 2009

Gud morning! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Morning prayers will always be answeered......... surprised na......... seeing me dis tym.......... ye............hehehe..........hehehe...........

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Subroto Chatterjee 14 May 2009

Oh Divine! Please grant Anjali's prayers! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Sandra Martyres 27 April 2009

A heartfelt prayer Anjali....another beautiful write 10

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Meggie Gultiano 15 March 2009

this is a nice prayer straight from the heart.

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Pawan G 13 March 2009

ha ha ha...super imeginative.. you going to beat the devine..with its own music... lovely thoughts

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Obed Souza 28 February 2009

Nice doing! You´ve got moving simplicity.

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Indira Renganathan 31 January 2009

Funny..I'm reminded of a tamil film song which asks for two hearts or minds...one to laugh and one to cry...nice write10

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Mahfooz Ali 22 January 2009

Sure ur prayer will be answered by the almighty......... keep it up......... 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Eddie Roa 20 January 2009

a prayer that sounds so innocent and childlike. The smooth flowing and unpretentious verse make for enjoyable reading.

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Luis Alvarado 17 January 2009

Food for thought. Your imagination is limitless! ! Pleasure to read. Thanks.

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Russel Choudhury 13 January 2009

What a charming poem, keep it up.

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Mittur Ramprasad 30 December 2008

Oh Divine what a talented bard you have given to this world, .........

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Ivor Hogg 30 December 2008

Your final stanz prpvides the answer

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Chelsea Brink 29 December 2008

very nice, the last stanza sums up the poem well.

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Dillon Lowery 29 December 2008

i like my summers and winters how they are. But these poem might fit better were you live

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Stephen Johanns 29 December 2008

i also wish for warmer summers seeing as i live in the northern u.s. and we've had some pretty frosty -30 degree wind chills

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