oh Divine!
Please listen the prayer of little fool
Cant you make the summer bit cool
Oh divine!
Cant you make winters little warm
and bid rains to fall only in farm
Oh Divine!
Cant you give us the wings to fly
And fix back of head with pair of eyes
Oh Divine!
Cant you give three Sundays per week
and free bodyguards to humble and meek
Oh Divine!
Cant you give us free food and home
So there is no work save to roam
Oh Divine!
Cant you give us two brains
So we dont have these fancies vain
ANJALI SINHA
17-12-2008
ha ha ha...super imeginative.. you going to beat the devine..with its own music... lovely thoughts
Simple in its profundity and profound in its simplicity. Well done my freind! 10+++
I too love writing poems.you have so many, which ones would like for me to read? I want to add so many of mine to this site, but I am to slow at typing. Thank you for your comment on my poem (OLD GLORY) I have revised it.
WHAT A PRETTY SWEET AND GREAT POEM IS THIS ONE...MELODIOUS, PERFECTLY DONE. RICH IDEA AND POETIC FLOW...ALL THESE ARE THE BEAUTIES OF YOUR THIS POEM..I REALLY LIKED IT VERY MUCH SPECIALLY THIS STANZA, , , , Oh Divine! Cant you give us two brains So we dont have these fancies vain
Beautiful idea of two brains! A creative perceptive thought. 10+++
Gud morning! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Morning prayers will always be answeered......... surprised na......... seeing me dis tym.......... ye............hehehe..........hehehe...........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh Divine! Please grant Anjali's prayers! ! Cheers. Subroto