Tuesday, November 6, 2007

Daily Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pot full of porridge
Brings my lass
Gliding in the air with
Her tops fluttering gently!
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rajagopal haran
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Frankie Renae 11 April 2008

awww! that is so cute! it actually reminds me of my boyfriend and i. always taking care of him. men are so lazy! =) hehe. j/k. but he loves to fall asleep with his head in my lap, playing with his hair. i'm gonna have to tell him about this one.

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Janice Windle 08 November 2007

Full of love and sensuality, I can visualise the domestic scene so well from this lyrical poem.

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Lola Sanchez 06 November 2007

This is beautifully written! Exactly like a Bollywood love scene! Lola

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